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| CeKayCo 2008-06-17 ch 3,  | abuseLol Great chapter! I think this one will be my favorite. The Priest is awesome, as is Sutton. (yes, i think I will review on all the chapters haha) |
| CeKayCo 2008-06-17 ch 2, | abuseLovely, lovely, lovely Haha, You have excellent character developments (especially Fran's possession thing going on), I can't believe you only have 8 reviews >:\ . The last few paragraphs following, "Give Franny a kiss," made me giggle a bit. |
| CeKayCo 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseOne word: Wow I love all the description in the first chapter. I'll be the first to say that normally, when reading descriptions, I'll kind of phase through them without really trying to picture anything, but yours had me hooked :D -CK |
| Dellarose 2007-12-27 ch 13, | abuse"If you bear my offspring, our child will be one half evil being from Hell, one fourth Satan the IX, and another fourth hot Irish actress. It will be unstoppable." HAHA! I really liked this story for it’s (albeit raunchy) humor. Sorry I didn’t review every chapter—I got lazy. But it was so funny! I’m glad I found it. Great job. |
| A Dark Ray of Hope 2007-05-24 ch 10, | abusethis chap is really good. i like the twist that lori is the child of satan, more so that sutton really wants her to bear his child/ren...i wonder if he'll really rape her..haha..might be good for an interesting chapter... |
| A Dark Ray of Hope 2007-05-21 ch 9, | abuseooh..the last part really caught my interest there..by the way, in what way can sutton really hurt lori? i'm just itching to find out...^_^ and it seems that sutton is interested in lori.i wonder if he is just toying with her or something else..haha... |
| A Dark Ray of Hope 2007-05-11 ch 8, | abuseooh..this was a pretty short one..but hey, it's a great cliffhanger..haha..will lorelei wake up in time? ^_^ |
| A Dark Ray of Hope 2007-05-07 ch 7, | abusewow! i love your story! talk about a cliffhanger though..i'll be looking forward to the next chapters...^_^ |
| Sarrrawr 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abusei like how you give the character introductions and how you dont use the names until they are said. but what ever happened to vincent. you didnt really give him a kiss of yet. so maybe bring him back? or just tell everyone he died. but i like it. im going to keep reading so keep updating |
| HighOnAirGurl 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusegood story so far. a few errors, long parts, but overall pretty good. |
| CitizenOfZozo 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Couple spelling/grammar errors in this, but nicely written. I like how casually you approach the paranormal in this piece. Wonder where the story's going from here. |