Reviews for Choices And Memories

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Blunt.Wolf 2008-08-02 ch 17,	abuseNICE MAN! the first part where they were in the jungle was awesome in how it was written but the end was very confusing. I notice you have a tendency for that. funny part when that monkey boy called kibuto 'princess' lol! no matter Kibuto rules. in fact i love all of your characters. oh and what happened after they left Awreis? that would mean that whole race was kind of arbitrary. oh and a blond girl drawing in a white room named Miname, huh? I think i'm starting to understand how you get your chapters so darn long. snickers but ya creativity is also reinventing of something new. LMAO!
Blunt.Wolf 2008-02-19 ch 16,	abuseNice update i like how the rize and co. travel to new town and such it make it more exciting to see a new arche every few chapter. i can tell u draw inspiration from the final fantasy series because this story is loaded with many reference to it. (i.e. tsora being a sky pirate and such) but that makes it relateable to in the manga genre
Melissa Norvell 2008-02-03 ch 16,	abuseIt took me a while to read this chapter, I think because people kept getting me away from the computer and I had to keep coming back after I read something to re-read it. I really loved this chapter and it's probably my favorite one. As to your review on Sacrifice, I took it as critisism really. I have a new chapter up if you want to read it. I look forward to your next update!
The Master Of Puppets 2008-01-31 ch 2,	abusedamn! more story nice-ness. the chapter was good, loved every paragraph. there were some errors in grammar but that don't detract anything from the storyline. vampires are cool, but wolf-type beings are just plain awesome-ness. i love the long chapters, dude. overall, the plot only has begun to unfold, it seems. here's hoping that the story gets greater with each chapter. till next time... no kidding, i got early morning classes, and four hours sleep is the maximum time i get today for staying up so late. oh, if you get the time check my story Saint Anger out. it's my first story posting here and i'd like to see what people think of it.
The Master Of Puppets 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abusemm, me like. i love long chapters; and though it seemed rather slow-paced, the first chapter was simply pure-goodness. the amount of detail placed in here is just awesome, yo. the story overall seems way different from the stuff i usually read, but it's great. simply superb. the names of the characters are quite interesting, too; though i have a hard time trying to pronounce in even in my head... til' next time, eh?
Blunt.Wolf 2008-01-13 ch 15,	abuseokay i finally finished and when Rizé and co. finally meet up again it felt like a revelation reading this. well i still can't say I can pronounce Rizé name (or half the names of other characters like Azreal and such), but i think i have an idea how to say it. I can tell Jin has a thing for kai and i hope they get together and to read again. Please update soon and if it isn't too much to ask i would value your R&R on my story. I have writter's block. till then -B.W.
Blunt.Wolf 2008-01-03 ch 11,	abuseWOW! I was reading and reading these past few days and it seems too long to review at the at last chapter so I decided to offer my advice and express my complete fandom to this great story. I love many of the character but rize isn't my Absolute favorite JIN IS! I still love the story and I keep hoping that he somehow survived but anyway I LOVE THIS. Also i cant help but notice that the break in the chapter has the symbol for the cancer zodiac sign (which is mine btw) and that some of the character tend to act as the way cancerians are said to to be a bit of a critic i see that many character tend to wear similiar clothing which is fine to me but other ppl might get bored at the thought. I figure it's just part of the culture in this universe. The plot is interesting but I need to see how some of the details tie into each other rather then add to the lore it get frustrating. I love this story enough to give my honest opinions about so I hope this isn't considered a flame
Melissa Norvell 2007-09-14 ch 12,	abuseAnother wonderfully written chapter. I'm glad that you updated I really enjoy reading this piece.
Melissa Norvell 2007-08-28 ch 10,	abuseI really liked this chapter a lot. Especially the concept behind it all. Grand job!
Melissa Norvell 2007-08-16 ch 8,	abuseThis is definitely getting interesting. Great job!
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-08-13 ch 8,	abuseOkay, I’m sorry, I read this chapter like couple days ago but I guess I couldn’t come up with a good review, and you know me with making a good long review. This chapter was all the way badass and ultimately amazing chapter, from beginning to end. This is what the readers all been waiting, all the action and that people expect from a good action anime and can’t wait till I see it on the big screen. This story is definitely without a doubt completely different from Final Fantasy X but there are some ideas seemingly taken from it. Azreal is the definition of a badass character with his only weapons his fists and his legs. I guess there is more to it with Rizé and Jin then what meets the eye… and who’s exactly is Nijen. I see that Kira and Tsora is still in the series and been keeping themselves occupied by training I see and I notice that you keep adding more and more characters which is like damn. Not only this ** about Death is going on but also political corruption involoved? That brings me to Final Fantasy 12… but don’t take it a wrong way, this has no ideas similar to the game but the game and the story both deals with politics. I love this story and I would highly advise you to keep the chapters coming and don’t finish the series any time soon. Make it a long running series and also the sequel has to be even better…just letting you know. Anyways, I love it and good luck with the continuation. Can’t wait. Xin - Project Versus Versus Infinity - We are gods to our own words
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-08-09 ch 7,	abuseWell, all I have to say that this was the most interesting and thrilling chapter so far into this series. You start out with an easy-hitter action and ended with a slug-feast action, which should pumped any readers up entirely. Azreal seemed to be the newest cool character and seemed well nicely developed to take place all the characters we will all deeply miss from previous chapters. Just some of his comedic approach alone can take the role of Tsora’s missed part and add some comic mischief along the journey. He turned real badass towards the end with Rumor, making another cameo appearance. Where’s Lukas I might add? Another thing that I wanted to share with you is that this journey completely reminded me of Final Fantasy X when Yuna has to go own that summoner’s pilgrimage. As more I read into this chapter, the more I remember the game especially when you have someone fighting with a ball. That’s a dead giveaway. Also, about the history when a summoner fights Sin, the summoner vanishes and one of the guardians takes the place the new Sin. I.E. Braska and Jecht team. Other than that few similarities and more with Death (Sin) and deathspawns (sinspawns), main character wielding duel guns (Yuna with two guns in FFX-2), then this story is completely original and I really like it. It’s like the mature, behind-the-scene type of a summoner’s journey… where ** happens all the time. You are a gifted writer… and keep on writing this. I love it a lot and I want to finish it. Till Next Time. Xin – Project Versus Versus Infinity – Reaching Beyond Limits.
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-08-08 ch 6,	abuseA very deep chapter you got here. Already action on his journey and he barely made any progress. More characters after more characters and that is what anime is all about… the many detailed characters you find. You describe the fight well with the dragon and if Rizé already met a furious beast like this when he just started then I can’t wait what he’ll fight next. I still see errors here and there but it will not hinder the amazing description this chapter has to offer. I’m still puzzled about the flashback with Jin and Kira, as you said that she was fourteen and I wonder how old she was when she left the island way back in chapter one. Unless she kept coming back to the island when she left Rizé with the bear with her named on it. Can you give me a summary on how old is everyone cause yeah, I’m kinda confuse on that part. That speech that Rize did at the end was well-written and gotten me believe that he might become one of the best Selcien. Other than that confusion, another outstanding chapter you got here and still looking forward and how this story plays out. By the way, I finally posted a prologue to my newly revised story that is now called Gigas Alpha Omega; give me an honest review if you have a chance. Till then, good luck. Xin – Project Versus Versus Infinity – Reaching Beyond Limits
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-08-08 ch 5,	abuseThis chapter didn’t have the same action as the last chapter but it was still excellent and superb. The detail you put in every paragraph is once again highly mesmerizing. There are too little of words that can describe this story even if I put down every single word from a dictionary and thesaurus. Rizé continues to be a good protagonist of the story and felt within myself how he must feel and what he must do. I’m still wary of Kira and know something is fishy is going around her and you made clear of that. The end for some reason made me all excited like a chill went through my spine (always happen when I’m excited). It’s like someone just gave me a candy that I wanted for a long time and nobody would give me it till now. It has gotten me pump up and can’t wait to actually start the real story and see what’s gonna happen on this journey. I am a loyal fan to this series and will follow it till it finally ends and I will then threaten you to bring out the sequel faster. Anyways, another great chapter to a mind-blowing masterpiece in the making and can’t wait to find out what happens next. Xin – Project Versus Versus Infinity – Reaching Beyond Limits
The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-08-07 ch 4,	abuseWow… This story keeps getting better and better. The more I read, the more this story is becoming spectacular and highly addicting. You finally added lots of action and you did a great job on describing it. Two battles happening at once, one with Jin and the other with Rizé inside his own mind. Rizé is still my all-time favorite character out of this series and also Lukas as Rumor is becoming all right. I can’t wait when Rjku finally fight cause you kept mentioning that he was trained with the blade. This chapter also introduces a lot of the plot and that got me really interested, as I want to see how this story unravels itself. There are couple of things I want to point out but these are highly my own opinions and not about any errors (since you’re already aware of them). The first thing is that you keep describing the same person over and over in each chapter. We already know what they look like; unless they somehow gotten a makeover like with Rizé or changed clothes- you don’t have to redo their description. The second thing is; what’s the deal with Kira? To me… I agree with Jin and say that she’s a **… and that she flirts with every guy that she meets. I mean c’mon, stop blushing… Kira is the definition of a wind: ever changing. Well that’s about it, I keep on going and I try to get people to read this story for you. To me, we’re already friends and I help out my friends… take care. Xin – Project Versus Versus Infinity – Reach Beyond Limits

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