ah. it makes me cry.
im in this place in my life.

this is great.
keep writing.

words are power,
liz

Hey, very nice poem! I loved the repetition of Keeper of the Light. As always, you writing is astounding! A real pleasure reading this piece.

Sadistikal

lost amongst your way. i nice poem showing a message through interpretation.

very good my friend :)

hey its Amy! I liked this poem a lot. I dunno, I could definately relate, and I know i say that a lot, but I really could. I'm trying to take this one path but I dont have the patience and I dont know exactly how to get to it. lol so this is definately a good peice.

much love, Dustytiger
Amy
AKA
RootbeerFloat

hey there, been quite a while, no? nice piece here, liked the repetition in it, gives a real desperate or plaintive tone to the piece. good piece, ttyl

Wow, I really liked this one. It's plaintive and hopeful at the same time. Very nicely done.

Kira
The Unsummary Queen is BACK!

I like the repitition of the phrase "keeper of the light". Very effective.