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| Vinnie K. 2007-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseThere's that raw emotion again... This certainly is a great song. The rhymes are good and aren't forced, the way you write how you feel is brilliant. I must admit, my favourite part is the last verse. It rounds off the song perfectly. Yeah, you so deserve a cookie for this. |
| RedWheeler 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWant to know something, when you had the first couple lines as your msn name I actually thought they were a song you were quoting. Yeah... I think it's probably one of your best, I really like the rhyming - it's there yet not forced. Always good. I lose interest if something sounds forced. Anyways, my favourite part was: "Red, lips part for these words! For all the silence you never heard! It don't mean a thing, don't mean a thing to you!" The same lines that were your name, I believe. Faving this for sure; but now I must review your other works I somehow missed. Guess I'll just have to put you on Alerts too, heh. Well talk to you later; great work! |