|Reviews for A poem about a lobster|
| Ronnie 3/8/07 . chapter 1
Really good imagery, again. This reminds me of a daydream I would have.
| JudgementMathew 2/22/07 . chapter 1
| eldrin 2/20/07 . chapter 1
This is a surprising one...the title is immediately eye-catching, yet I wasn't really expecting the poem to be so delightful. There are some wonderful phrases - "That there is a shotgun/Between it’s legs" for example, and the poem comes together in a way that makes one laugh and think at the same time.
The only line that seems a bit off is the first. It juts out of the pacing of the rest of the piece too much.
Very nice work.
| Exiled-Knight 2/20/07 . chapter 1
So dream about that lobster often? Well that lobster was very deep. The poem was very serious and good and symbolic and then the lobster just pops up! :D