Really good imagery, again. This reminds me of a daydream I would have.

I laughed.

This is a surprising one...the title is immediately eye-catching, yet I wasn't really expecting the poem to be so delightful. There are some wonderful phrases - "That there is a shotgun/Between it’s legs" for example, and the poem comes together in a way that makes one laugh and think at the same time.

The only line that seems a bit off is the first. It juts out of the pacing of the rest of the piece too much.

Very nice work.

So dream about that lobster often? Well that lobster was very deep. The poem was very serious and good and symbolic and then the lobster just pops up! :D