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| Redeemed 2007-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseThe metaphors and alliteration were put to excellant use; it gave your poem symmetry, focus, and rhythm. I thought your choice of objects was interesting, especially the connection between mankind's downfall and the destruction of nature's beauty. The ending wrapped was highly appropriate--saving the most important for last. Nice work. :) |