Reviews for A man Should be Forgiven

Ebony Falcon 2007-02-24 ch 1,	hey, this is neat. I think I can grasp the concept behind this. ^_^ keep writing
Ale4you 2007-02-23 ch 1,	i like the format. it sounds like the main character trying to pore his heart out to who ever was betrayed so he can forgive himself. very good!
a silenced revolution 2007-02-22 ch 1,	I like it. Good work! A few typos tho: "I am need them to live." Did you mean for "am" to be there? "Man makes mistakes and cry." Cries? "Man tumble down" tumbles? One last thing: "Because I am just man" is off to the side. I don't know if you wanted to do that; I know FP sometimes does that. Sorry if I'm being nit-picky. I like other people to point out spelling/grammar errors in my writing, which is why I do it here. Later. ~:Isabella May:~
XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-02-22 ch 1,	Great Poem. Its not just Man who mess up. Women do to. But I see where you comming from. I love it. Keep it up! KristieMarie