SO CUTTE! I LOVED IT!
one word describes it:
AW =)

Aww, this was a great story!! :)

Hiya, just thought I'd check out your other story, can't wait to read the rest of this! :)

Cute Story!

OMG such an amazing story it was so cute! I loved it I really felt what tiana felt and I loved the simple yet problematic struggle between the two lovers! Keep writing!

aw so sweet

xx

that...was ...amazing.
really, really good. Keep up the good work

wow, I just read the whole story right now and I liked it. It waas really sweet and cute.

it was a good story and so was they call it karma but u always talk about their eyes and every other word was orbs

I liked your other story better. This one feels kind of rushed and me as a reader don't really get to know the characters very well.

I read the whole story without reviewing.
Sorry about that, but I was too into it.
This is really good.
Like awesome.
Love the ending.
:D

enjoyed it(:

loved it...it was bit of a cliche but that's okay...i hope to read more of your work so keep writing!

very sweet
i loved it
can't wait for new projects

izzie

ouch
that's gotta hurt
poor jaiden

izzie