I feel so sheepish now! You see, I was ready to dismiss this poem as something so-so when I read your disclaimer. I realised that you had inserted song titles into this poem, very witty indeed.

Haha! Great twists and connections between the songs. :)

clever. i like it.

Wow. Strange, but oddly nice

soo sweet!

Certainly not what I expected, but it's a wonderful surprise. A very original and witty poem, well written. Is there any special meaning behind the X's between stanza's? Well, even though I didn't knew all the artists/songs, it still made a wonderful read. Good work!

I read this first because it was short... haha. I like it the way you combine lyrics into the poem and can still rhyme... for some reason i find rhyming rather difficult. So... GREAT JOB! :D

Cute. Very original.

;)

that was really cool.

I loved this!
great job

and i am a mega huge anna nalick fan, so i was happy to see catalyst in there!

=]

This was cute. and catalyst by anna nalick is my favorite song. :)

bec

Hey! I already told you that I love this. I love how you combined lyrics with your own words. It's beautiful!
X Lien

Ooh, I like this poem! I like how you put in song names and used them differently. I love this poem!
Happy Writing!
~HawkDancer

Beautiful. I like the style that the poem was written in. Very sweet. Great job! Keep writing!