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Reviews For: All I ask you to
no-face 2007-02-23 . chapter 1
Amazingly intense!
Which Mistake am I 2007-02-21 . chapter 1
i really like this. i can relate to it and personally i think that is what makes it so good. ♥
S.R. Sleasman 2007-02-21 . chapter 1
This poem is both sweet in sentiment, yet sad in the longing of the speaker. It is overly simple, but I still like the theme and style.

Good job.
Bunnie09 2007-02-21 . chapter 1
This poem is so adorable! I love the rhyming that you've done! This poem is wonderful!
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