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| VanillaOreo 2007-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseOh my gosh that's so sweet! I think this is my favorite thing that I've read all day. And since this is coming from a girl's point of view, I can appreciate the thought. |
| S.R. Sleasman 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseIt could use improving, but it is not entirely bad. I would try some vocabulary, but I like the point that you were making. |