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| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting work. I really liked the subject matter, I just wish you went more deeply into it. It's great short and sweet like this, but I think it would be amazing if you lengthened it. Other than that great job. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Aleksy The Flying Onion 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseWowee, why didn't I check this out sooner? You are such a versatile writer. This is a great poem dear. It's epic, dramatic, metaphoric, rhythmic, compact, and all around awesome! Do you write poems often? Cause you totally should. I would like, read them. And love them. Alone...and in the dark. Just kidding. I think... Anyway, nice job! Yeah, that's what I was trying to say. :D |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseI love the "electric fingers" part of this. :D I was incredibly amused by your profile, and felt your poetry would be equally entertaining. I was right. :) Nice work. Keep writing! :) |
| Ivory Taint 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseCrazy goodness, yo! Whoo! (It's late and I'm a bit loopy.) :p |
| Morgan Sowaes St.Claire 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS AWESOME. It could be, like.. the Deity Complex motto or sommat. "We will have a revolution of our own." |