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| DeeFective 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseOh, it's eerie. I like it. |
| Ceridweyn 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThank you for writing how people feel. Nice style, kind of choppy and disrupted, and it really works |
| shadow-spirit 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseintersting ryme scheeme - chaotic yet some how rythmic - i like it. nie use of short punchy repatitions. very efective. |