Oh my goodness! I had read the first few paragraphs, thinking it might be some cute piece, then, I became suspicious toward the middle, then, bam! When he took her hand to lead her somewhere, I knew what was going to happen, I just felt it, the way you wrote it, clued me in, I knew the closet would be used for something naughty! But, I didn't expect for them to be in love, I thought it was just lust, LoL!.. Great piece of work!

Haha,

I edited this.

I'm so cool.

(Other than wanting to hit you with a pogo stick, I get generally good feelings about this piece.)

:)

This is so cute! I love it. You should write more like this. Fantastic!

this.is.just.amazing.