Please please update soon I'm inlove with this story and it's characters! I can't wait to se what happens next!

This is cool so far. I really like the character Amelia. I also like the dialogue between the guys. It sounds so real. haha

I can tell this is just getting started. Can't wait for your next update!

I like this story. Typos where "ed" should/shouldn't be on the end of a word, making the story worse. But I like it and if you take more care with you're typing it will be so much better.

Well, i like it. I'm a fan of alternating point of views, but you have a few silly typos. But it's okay cos it makes me smile! :D

good start, very interesting and mysterious

Pretty good, but it still needs tons of work. Clean up chapter two, it is still very sketchy, instead of making tons of edits, just take some more time with it. It doesn't explain anything I don't want to discourage you or anything! Keep writing and trying! I'll keep reading, its really good.