Good story so far, like whats going on. Aeron is confused and doesnt want to admit anything or doesnt know how shes feeling. At least thats what I got out of it. Its good, update soon.

Okay, another review. These two chapters were god too. Interesting and different, but good. Again, things seem to be moving a little fast paced, and some parts seem a little jumpy, like something is missing. Which all adds up too confusion. But it sort of falls into place by reading more.
The characters don't seem all that developed, just yet. It's hard to figure out where they all fit it. Axel especially. How is he related with the other characters? Well, not related related, but tied in with them I guess.

Anyway, keep writing, I'm interested in seeing where it goes.

Cool story. It's different, fairly fast paced too, so far, but not bad. A few spelling mistakes I noticed, more likely typos than anything else. "mouth" instead of what I'm guessing is supposed to be "mother" when Aeron first get home.
'Bout to go read the next two chapters. Let you know what I think when I get there.