Briliant as always - rereading is compulsory.
Silverkestrel

Excellent! Love the last line. Don't seem to have got that far in the trilo-series yet.
Never mind
SC

Really, really good. Love the way you put sentences together. Been meaning to review for a while. Excellent.
SocratesCat

I really liked this. Not the acrostics but the writing. I'm not saying the acrostics weren't good but I was more interested in the way you weaved your words together. I liked this line the best: "Volatile when we're near a bedroom
Entire when we exit, satiated". It was all interesting.