i like it...i have experienced this before. it's somewhat similar to my poem One Night. I think you did a good job and i like your profile! lol even though it's long lol*thumbs up* thanks lots for your review :)

Byes

i was thinking the other day how you would even describe love and i think rite here, you got pretty close.

i would love if you read some of my stuff here: . its where i post all my sarcastic shorts poems...

and i love your writing.

and i know what you meaning abt 8th grade. im there rite now and just...wow... haha.

Liz