ahh @.@!

I totally thought I'd reviewed this already, the first time I read it, but apparently my brain hates me so yeah. -smacks head on desk-

But really... I

Uh, Jasmine, I'm in Sweden. Are you joking? I can't tell your name if I'm halfway across the world, now can I?

Cute simple...funny in it's stupid yet smarter way...I'm delirious I'm no sure what I'm saying...Also:did your teacher actually accept this? Hehe..I've yet to see a teacher like that..

aww.. poor, cute, red balloon

"..jeans that had to have belonged to his little sister"- i laughed :) great description

This is so weird, and for some reason I love it! I wouldn't use "Once upon a time" at the beginning, as it seems awkward and unecessary.

Great job, very funny!

~:Isabella May:~

PS You do spell "pseudonym" correctly, I believe.