Bloody awesome chapter :) The description of Demitri deepens him more and that's good. It's sad that Aiden insists on going back to his dad's, but the ending is really cute. Makes me wonder when the boys are going to see each other again, hopefully in better circumstances though lol Good job!

Yay you updated ^-^ It made me happy. It was beautifully detailed. The descriptions of Aiden help us get a better view of him. I love how Demitri wants to comfort him. It's really sweet. The ending was sad and well written :) Good job and keep up on the awesome work!

First off, I want you to know that you're pretty dang good. I know this cause you had me spazzing out loud. I swear I don't do that often lol And I rambled off the plot I knew so far, save the slash that is, to my mom when she walked by the computer. XD Yes, yes, know that you are good :)
I can't wait to see where this goes. The gunshot caught me completely off guard (my little spaz moment). I can't wait to find out why Aiden is hurt. The line where the light came on and Demitri lost his breath made me smile.
Write on!

Like it. Slash stories are love :) And it's true about all the hardships and such. Looking forward to more, assuming that there is more. The details are awesome, they give us something to picture. Good job!