I love this.
I think your writing is genius and I absolutely love reading it. You're going to get somewhere far in life.

Good song. Nice title.

"Lets" should be "Let's".

~Twilight Starr~

love love love this

Beautiful. I'm probably going to be humming this to myself for the rest of the day.

I really like this. It sounds like it'd make a good song, you know? The bridge doesn't have that interesting originality that the rest of the song does, though. So I'd work on that. But overall, it's great.

This is really nice. I'm guessing that it's a song, and I can totally imagine everything. Wow. Great job.