xD hehehe. Y'know, I think this is one is pretty nice. Capturing what we may feel very well. I like this (:
Write more soon~

I really don't understand where you were trying to go with this. Is it self-approach? Is it just self-esteem? Either way your rhyme scheme is pretty unequal, but you no doubt were trying to point that out. It is good that it approach such issues, but work with the rhyming and clarity and this could be even better.