Reviews for Screaming in Neutral

Reviews For: Screaming in Neutral

thursdays and rain 2007-05-22 ch 11,	abuseso sad.. the feeling in this is so raw and i like it.. hearts, ~♥ tiara
thursdays and rain 2007-05-21 ch 4,	abusei agree..
thursdays and rain 2007-05-21 ch 2,	abuseinteresting..
Mistress of Eternity 2007-03-19 ch 11,	abuseHuman emotions are the most difficult things to relate, to explain, but... you have conquered. The very last line speaks to me, summing up things I have too, felt in the past... "Morning after and I can still feel the touch, his mouth… and nothing" Beautiful. -Anna
darknessblooms 2007-03-13 ch 11,	abuseThis is like an echo of the same (or very similar) feelings, even though the situation was (is?) different. The title and the last word are very familiar to me, in all of its meanings and connotations. Maybe one day I can articulate my story as well as you. Thank you for sharing.
method acting 2007-03-12 ch 11,	abusemost of this was really nice. i like the title and chapters up until names, then hands...but the rest seemed too blunt. all together--well written.
Kicking Poe 2007-03-08 ch 6,	abuseI read them all, but this is the one that will stick with me. haunting. throughout, there is such a detached tone that somehow becomes personal and a...compression of emotion(?) that is striking in its intensity. full of paradox and at times brilliance. cheers.
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-03-01 ch 3,	abuseOh, sad. You bring up a really good point that I hadn't thought of before. Nice. Keep writing! :)
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-03-01 ch 2,	abuseInteresting. I suppose I should probably read these all first before I go reviewing, but I like to review each chapter, so whatever. I like this. Keep writing! :)
Jorda K Terre 2007-02-28 ch 11,	abuseCompletely breath-taking. Never have I seen such an amazing story told in so few words. Excellent job.

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