Reviews for she doesnt care - FictionPress.com

sicklysnowwhite 2007-02-27 ch 1,	abuse"a lie untruth the opposite of who she is" the beat is off there, and the same for the beginning. the ending is vary good though and the whole poem is marginally discriptive. good job.
The Intelligent Designer 2007-02-24 ch 1,	abuseSad...poor girl. Someone needs a hug!
burning in effigy 2007-02-22 ch 1,	abuseinteresting poem and idea.. i'm not sure i follow it though.. kind of confused at the "a subway mask" subway mask? reminds me of the sandwiches. i know i'm totally off, but i do like the short lines- seems fitting in a way loving the ending :)