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Reviews For: Ocean of Darkness

bk42189
2005-03-04
ch 1,
abuseWell, for one thing you are right. The symbolism is right on the money. Great poem. The only thing that was a little weird was the end, it just didn't seem to flow right for me.
The Sneak
2005-03-04
ch 1,
abuseShort and ... bitter cold, just the way I like it. So this poem is five years old, I can still review! Anyway, it's pretty cool. Nice word choice and all that.Cheers, and good work.
giggles for boys
2004-12-19
ch 1,
abuseI love the ocean! It's soo pretty. I liked the descriptions in this poem. Very nice!
Sakura1985
2001-03-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseAWWW!!!! This one is so cute!!!! You're a great poet!!!
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