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| bk42189 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseWell, for one thing you are right. The symbolism is right on the money. Great poem. The only thing that was a little weird was the end, it just didn't seem to flow right for me. |
| The Sneak 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseShort and ... bitter cold, just the way I like it. So this poem is five years old, I can still review! Anyway, it's pretty cool. Nice word choice and all that.Cheers, and good work. |
| giggles for boys 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI love the ocean! It's soo pretty. I liked the descriptions in this poem. Very nice! |
| Sakura1985 2001-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWWW!!!! This one is so cute!!!! You're a great poet!!! |