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| Marajohuiki 2007-05-25 ch 1, | abuseNo it is NOT the flipping end. You ARE going to write another chapter, and there WILL be more of Kali in it! You're freaking awesome, and you can't just leave us on that happy, not-very-conclusive note! Pretty please write more? |
| chrnoskitty 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThat had to be the best and most humourous story I have ever read, great job! ^^ |
| Nara Merald 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseAh! This was adorable! (Adorably dumb and outrageous because how could Leone be so blaze about it?, but the mental image of him cuddling a Leopard cub is just -aw-) I loved Zaq's appearance, as well as Leone's dumb names (Spot- that is cringe worthy!) |
| diebyownhands 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI love Leone. He is such a wonderful character. "I hate blood. I especially hate my blood outside of my body, where it doesn’t belong." I really enjoyed this line |
| We Called Her Thalia 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseHey, if you mean 'voler' as in the french word for thief, then I believe it's actually spelt 'voleur'. However, I'm not certain of that, and most of your reviewers probably wouldn't know one way or another, so it doesn't matter too much. |
| A Day Late 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseawesome, absolutely awesome. alright, so i'm only halfway through reading it... but i'm way tired and i cannot keep my eyes open long enough to finish reading this, no matter how good it is. but from what i've read, i assure you it's creative and extremely hilarious, not to mention well-written. nice work, keep it up! |