Creepy and mysterious... Nice!

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Man your stuff rocks I wish I could do poetry like you. I love the last two lines

I love it! I like the last two lines the best! Oo, you are soo good at writing!

haha I like this! In a way it kind or reminds me of you. I dont know why but it does.

Totally creepy, and awesome. I loved the last line. I can just imagine these dark, beautiful, terrible eyes. Wonderful job.

I especially like the last two lines. They're very powerful. Good job!