Aw I just love this. It describes that moment really well; when you are having a dream that you don't wanna wake up from - why does it always happen at the best part of the dream eh? EH?? *sigh* V.good well done : )

Aw, that's sad, that it was a dream I man. Nice. Loved it. Kep up the work

Chobi

ooh, I like this. It's almost suspenseful. I like how you described being so close and then waking up alone. That would make a fun song! ^^

hey i saw ur review for my story thanx.i love this poem,i will be uploading the first two parts of my crappy non-yaoi story soon.but i dont know hen part three will be coming coz i lost the book where i wrote it lol.

AWWWWW!!!!!!! That was so sad!!!!!!!!! Luved it!!!!!

Aww...how sweet! I love the angst in every stanza!How come I never get dreams like that? *pout* Keep on dreamin!