It's very sad. My favorite line was "her collarbone heart jutted for him." Your imagery is always so beautiful.

and Girl Contraband returns. yay

Wow. I found this conveys incredibly vivid emotion, there's a lot of tension and fear and it just gives off the expression that she's exhausted...I love it, really, espcially the Judas part. Worship the allusions to Alice! Fantastic _.

'collarbone heart' and the use of tarot cards, very ominous, very good

Interesting. I like it.

j. lynn

it's so exotic. i seriously don't know what to make of it, but i'm enjoying the way the words sound together and the flow and color and imagery. it's exciting in a way.

[secret: i sort of just jumped and squealed and clapped my hands in joy. yes. i am that lame].

'collarbone heart.' jesus.