To anyone who reads poetry in their head, please try reading this out loud... It's much more poignant and sweet it really comes alive loud, where every 's' sound is like a little tug at your heart, and every line of every fragment of thought is a whisper to a memory of your own...

Coudn't hav put it in better words myself... ur wrk is extremly gd n dnt let any1 tell u any different... 'All i need is you and I. Us.'

Aw...so sweet...

Sadness overcomes me... nice poem.