This is really cool; I didn't take it so much literally as symbolically, especially "you don't know your original hair color, or what you look like without eyeliner" like everything she does is an act.

Anyway, the comparison is awesome.

randome, indeed. but, i liked it. the author note is not neccessary...it takes away from what the reader assumes, but it works!

That's really interesting! I loved this line

However, you know the truth about none of these things. You’ve made up your own lies for them. You’re certainly not dead, but can you really say you’re alive?

Really good there! Keep writing! :)

Anna Christie

This actually was very good, if random. Nice symbols, even. I like how the girl that opposed the shallow one wasn't deep or grand, and that they were both equally as...unalive. Good