Reviews for The boy who lived down the lane

Wilkem18 2007-03-21 ch 2,	abusenow here this. story is interesting, but the details suck. For example, what movie did they see? where did they shop and what for? Also, you may want to put "quotes" inside your story. It will make it a lot easier to understand. Otherwise, it was totally sweet.
Wilkem18 2007-03-06 ch 1,	abusewent under bed to go to sleep? do you know how little sense that makes. Good otherwise.