Reviews for Oh, My Cynical Love

Cel M. 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseHmm, I liked it, lol. I think it would be awesome if you added mroe to it, maybe make a full length story? It would be an interesting storyline. Either way, cool fic. =]
BLORP 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseIs her name Michelle or Sarah?
Singular Angel 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI liked it, although, the setting could be better developed. I must say, your main character's opinions shift a little quickly though. Maybe put more description into that but I would love you to continue this.
The Er Bear 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI liked your story. I thought it was kind of weird that she's getting an arranged marriage at 16 and it takes place in modern times, but I got used to it. I saw that you were only planning this as a one shot, but I think it would be really cool if you continued with the story.
dana 2007-02-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseim a very straightforward person..and my honest opinion...continue the story..it'll be worth it
CitizenOfZozo 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting piece. Some more setting description would help, as it seemed to be set in the modern day, which made the whole arranged marriage bit a little hard to understand. You captured the emotions of the characters well, though. Nicely written.