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| Moondog Dozier 2007-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseVery well written song. The audibility comes across well. The repetition also helps to frame the vocals into a patterned verse-chorus flow. The word twists you've used also add to the unique sound you've created. Excellent song. I'd listen to it. |
| Captain-Dalien 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseHey, I really like this. I wish I could hear it, of course, but I'm sure it's just as good to read as to listen to. Anyway, you did a good job. Kudos. ~CD |