I liked it, it flowed though out the whole poem. Unlike some poems I've read.

ok, seriously. Have you read Impulse? I've forgotten who it's by, but it goes right along this type of poem. trust me, read it, it's good. It seems to go with these types of poems.

Beautiful...simply beautiful and sad at the same time. Thumbs up!

Wow I really like that maybe needs a tranistion word or two to flow better thanks for the review on my poem a note to my parents btw!