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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseNice, short poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Masked Soul 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem not just because I think it shows a part of poetry's nature but because it compares poetry to painting, two art forms one uses images to tell you something and the other speaks to you to draw an image in your head, great poem |
| Definition 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseOne line: You have a definite talent for cinquains. Absolutely gorgeous. |
| SirScott 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThat a nice thought about sketching. It makes me wish I knew how to draw. ~SirScott |
| Ramenluver 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseNice. Only one thing. The word "imagery" is used more to describe stories and other forms of art that don't involve pictures. When your describing drawings or paintings, "images" is more appropriate. Okay, that confused me, so you probably don't know what I'm saying. ^_^' Forgive me. It's early. It was good. Period. -Ramen |
| SpeedingCars8 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abusei'm a fan of art so i of course loved this. i love poems stated simply, that can convey so many thoughts in so few words! |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was really nice. My favorite line was 'emotions etched on paper' |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseYour work inspires me once again. It's simple and enjoyable. Keep up the cool work! -C.N P.S Thanks for the review, by the way. What is a cinquain? and how do I write one? I would appreciate it. |
| Methuselah Renard 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseBoth sketches and doodles rock. Like you suggested, they tend to better capture your emotions, and could be just as appealing as fine art. |
| DarkBlysse 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, wonderful! |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuse^^ I like your short poems! They're so simple, yet so enjoyable to read! I like the simple way you make me understand what the poem is about! Cool! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| jojoba-music-girl 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThis one's my favourite up until now! I really liked the way you expressed yourself! I'll put this into my favourites! |
| Lana Mira Beth 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseCool. I like this style, mostly I think for the whole mytonymy/synechdoche union. This is another very cute yet expressive poem. Says what it is without apology. I like it. :) |
| purplepants 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abusecaptures the feeling in the slight space used. very nice. |
| Amari 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI love this one, too! I love art, any and all types, but am not completely gifted with it, lol. Oh, well, I play a bit of piano, so I guess that is my share of art. I really did like this! With utmost sincerety, remaining Amari |