Sad. Yet cute.

holy... that was beautiful and sad and made me wonderously joyous for some reason.

"i swear on the moon that/i’ve never lied to you, love"

now i want some boy to say that to me and then i'll marry him.

hah

excellent job!

It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. In a good way! It was written beautifully.

Wow! That was so awesome! I loved how you inserted things in paranthesis, just as random thoughts that really made the story extra special! I also loved the line "Faded away into a distant memory..."

wow. so this is pretty much amazing.