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Reviews For: Plastic Body Parts

Take the Money and Run
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI love this, its pretty sad because its something someone might think of inventing, taking feelings away, but the satire is funny in a way. Great job!
Darkday Chaos
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseJust about the same feel as The Machine. I like it, it's cute in a way I don't really get.

-DDC
sakine
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if this is supposed to be humorous, but the satire got to me! Funny! (interesting idea, though...)
THROUGHTHESEEYES
2007-03-16
ch 1,
abusegreat thoughts on plastic and machines!
left me wtih a definite cold emptiness just thinking about all those things! great job.
http://inventors.
here is the history of plastic...which this poem inspired the search for!
Olivine
2007-03-02
ch 1,
abuseMaybe Michael Jackson should take a look at this. And Paris Hilton. Very well done, bravo.

--Greyhound.
Heihana
2007-02-26
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this a lot.
Though when I read it,
drugs came to mind. I don't know why.
Just thought you'd like to know that.
Other than that, it's really good
and very true.
AlopexLagopus
2007-02-23
ch 1,
abusehahaha, I love this poem, at first I thought it was gonna be some kind of ramdom thing, but now I see that it's a random thing with meaning...and that's a good thing. ^_^
PocoSnow15
2007-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI had to read this after I read the title and didn't see a summary. It was really cool! It was really realistic, with the advertisers selling and machine taking feelings away! Awesome job!
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