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| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this, its pretty sad because its something someone might think of inventing, taking feelings away, but the satire is funny in a way. Great job! |
| Darkday Chaos 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseJust about the same feel as The Machine. I like it, it's cute in a way I don't really get. -DDC |
| sakine 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if this is supposed to be humorous, but the satire got to me! Funny! (interesting idea, though...) |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abusegreat thoughts on plastic and machines! left me wtih a definite cold emptiness just thinking about all those things! great job. http://inventors. here is the history of plastic...which this poem inspired the search for! |
| Olivine 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseMaybe Michael Jackson should take a look at this. And Paris Hilton. Very well done, bravo. --Greyhound. |
| Heihana 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this a lot. Though when I read it, drugs came to mind. I don't know why. Just thought you'd like to know that. Other than that, it's really good and very true. |
| AlopexLagopus 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abusehahaha, I love this poem, at first I thought it was gonna be some kind of ramdom thing, but now I see that it's a random thing with meaning...and that's a good thing. ^_^ |
| PocoSnow15 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI had to read this after I read the title and didn't see a summary. It was really cool! It was really realistic, with the advertisers selling and machine taking feelings away! Awesome job! |