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| sissalovedme 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abusei loved it baby it was awesome you are such a good writer |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Garsh 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseomg, that was simply amazingg. I loved it. So creepy and dark. |
| Xriny 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuse:'( |
| GirlxAnachronism 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat imegery, and very thought provocing. There are alot of different ideas you could take from this poem |
| DEADLYpoisonous 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abusei love this poem. i can feel its inner beat. beautifully written dear |
| Dragracingqueen 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseAW POOR BABY! T.T I am gunna go read the rest of your poems...You do a marvoulus job dear!! |
| braindead1345 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAt first i thought this was going to be a janies got a gun type song, but then he killed them! still, its sad.. |
| the unreal 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abusevery good, very simple. the title is alright, but it could be better...i dont have any ideas. |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abusegood but creepy. |
| kathleen30263 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseGood! |
| Paige Angel Lenaigh 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abusethat was really good. it was simple and to the point but it kinda makes you wonder what the details of the situation was... hm... *ponders* |
| PocoSnow15 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI like your title, I thought it went really well with the entire poem and really enhanced it's flow. That was so sad! I can't believe their deaths at the end! Wow, great job! |