I do enjoy the poem, though I must agree with Youkai Author in the area of cuteness. The topic and vocabulary of the poem makes it seem as if the narrator is a weak person, however.

I like how you open and close with "Just hold me." It brings completion to the poem.

Over all, 4.5/5 on my scale (.5 off due to the cuteness, but that's just me).

These could be song lyrics if the rythem didn't keep getting off in different areas...

Thought provoking and well-written otherwise.

And Greg Charleston does have a decent point as well. I had no idea he was here. Must go say hi.

Yeah, um, this is an ok poem. That's about all I have to say.

It's too cute. >_< It's written extremely well and sounds like would be a good song- but it's too cute for my tastes.

yeah, everyone needs thier somebody. :] great poem! ;]
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The fourth-to-last stanza ("I’m addicted; I can’t get enough") is out-of-place, corny, etc. The quality of the third-to-last stanza is higher than the rest, but unfortunately the subsequent stanza ("Your touch; Is what I want; Is all I need") swings the poem back into a sickeningly familiar unoriginality. The rest was predictably standard, which is not necessarily bad, but nothing astounding, either. Unfortunately, I can give few tips on improvement, for I am no poet.