ah, love this. you've got me completely and utterly hooked. the sappy part of me desperately wants him to get a grasp of his feelings for evan before prom, but i'll love anything you write, i swear. can't wait for more. :D

I'm really glad I found this again. I had lost it! Now I can keep up with it. I'm thinking prom night's going to be sufficiently _awful_.

Oh~ I feel so bad for Evan. I hope Darien comes around before prom and realizes he does like Evan ... >.> or maybe slightly after ... still, you're doing marvelously well.

Allanasha Ke Kiri

I love this story.

=) Mandraco.

hm...i wonder what'll happen between Evan and Darien...please update soon! ^^

I luve ur story! please update soon! ^_^

I love Evan! :D

-Karen

I just found this story and I have to say...pretty interesting stuff. There's something about this story (or storyline, I'm not sure) that just captures my attention. Your writing has gradually gotten better since the start of this story and I like where you're at now. :) Anyway, I hope you update soon, because I'd really like to read about Darien and Evan at Six Flags.
Ps. I really like Evan. He is such a sweetie. And the whole barely-kiss thing was super cute. I hope there's more where THAT came from. ;)

Neat piece of work you've got here! Practically indulging myself in it. I love the enigmatic and naive persona of Evan.

This is hilarious so far. The MC is pretty awesome.

-“Hey, we promised you we’d behave, which is harder said than done. See you tomorrow,” Theo and he wave goodbye before they head to the western gates.
Close the dialogue with a period there, as the following isn't a speech tag (something to the effect of said).

-“You did say you were bored with school,” flinging an arm around my shoulder, Alex gives me a smile, and we walk together to the north gates. “We gave you a challenge! And it’s nice seeing those two under control.”
Same here. Flinging would then be capitalized.

-Cross-dress in skimpy bondage clothing and run around the school kissing all the male teachers the day before finals…?!!
Wow. Hahaha!

Your characters are already well defined enough, I have an impression of them all. I think Alex swings for the other team, based on that one paragraph.

This is a really good story and your writing is humorous and very easy to read (doesn't have a ton of mistakes that distract the reader). I like all the characters (so far), each one has their own little quirk, but Evan is my fav.

I'm hooked and looking forward to your next update!

Omg! yey an update! and just yesterday too! I hardly ever check my emails, so the fact that I just happened upon your update is MORE THAN JUST CHANCE...I can't wait to see what happens!..;o; I'm scared for Evan, and I hope Ollala doesn't ruin anything..@o@...

I love this story! As I was reading it, I was grinning like an idiot! I love all the characters, especially Nathan and Theo! They are just hilariously funny! I don't know why, but I love it when two completely strait guys do gay things just to prove a point. The first back story was my favorite part! And Olalla just cracks me up! I don't know why, but I can totally see myself doing some of the things she does(I don't think I'd ever make a yaoi club, but you get the point).

Please update soon! This has officially become one of the best online stories I have ever read!

-Rasko

Boy, am I glad I found this story. It's so cute how they're so openly blunt. I really like Evan's character. It seems like he has a protective shield but is deep down really fragile. I can't wait until your next update! :)

-Karen

I like this so far, its interesting
I hope you update soon