That was really quite deep. I see the homeless people everyday in the streets, but after a while (I feel totally terrible for admitting this, but hopefully I'm not alone) you sort of phase them out. Reading this has most definately reminded me that they are there.

I don't know if your intent was humanitarian or not, but hey all for a good cause - and a positive review!

Ladybird

I agree with the above.

Interesting.

You undoubtedly have a gift. Find something of worth to be writing about and stick to it. Give the world something to make your existence meaningful. These one-shots won't sate you forever; when you do write something more, make sure it's the right something.