Very clever.

I like how you spelt it out with out really saying it.

another great work. sometimes i feel like a lost cause too.

Very nice poem. I love the hidden message, "I am a lost cause"

I love the style in which this was written. The emotions are clear and you worded this piece nicely. Great job and keep writing!

i love the i am a lsot cause. thats very clever. its a really good piece!