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Mimzy 2009-10-22 . chapter 8
who's tom? and i thought the horse that dumped andrea on her butt was named breeze? ..
animegirl214 2009-08-28 . chapter 16
hahah. aw~
she's PREGnaNT. :O
artmagus 2009-03-31 . chapter 16
he he he i like it!
artmagus 2009-03-31 . chapter 12
ok i just had to review before i read the rest !
It was really shocking ! omg ! but in a nice way he he he
VampirexBite 2009-02-20 . chapter 16
this story was better then the first
once again, i loved the ending
cant wait to read #3!! xox
Hazelnut Romance 2009-01-19 . chapter 16
sweet. 2 stories in one night. update on the sequel to this soon!
ChristianAngel01 2009-01-02 . chapter 16
Whoa I love this story It was soo funny and I am speechless I was laughing in every chapter I love it ! especially the last chapter at the ending I wanted to jump up and down YAY! I love it!! I just cant say that enough
Awesome Story!
ChristianAngel01 2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Lol I love Coffee at midnight and I know I am going to love this :D
starrybluepoet 2008-12-04 . chapter 1
Loved this one as much as the first. If not more so...

Only issue for me: Not crazy about the ending of being Pregnant. I felt that this area needed more prior structure. It felt like a last minute plot thing. You have done such a great job every where else in you story this just feels off. Don't get me wrong go with it; but it needs subtle structure prior to the end. That is something you do very well at. I just need a little nudge as a reader.

Example of what I mean is-- that most women don't just hop in the sack with out thinking about prevention at all, especially when they are not under the influence. (Thus maybe you are trying to say she drunk off Reeve's sexiness to think? I'll buy it. I've never dated a vamp.) Or maybe she didn't think she could get pregnant from a vamp and didn't think to ask?

any-who, just my thoughts.
Don't get me wrong LOVE THIS STORY.
HappyLittleLoser 2008-06-23 . chapter 16
!
amazing
a couple of typos, but its so good!
HappyLittleLoser 2008-06-23 . chapter 2
get along *well*, not good
anyway, these are really good, i love them =)
hannah 2008-05-14 . chapter 16
"Why are you grinning like that? Did you eat something Christian gave you?” lol, that was an awsome quote! Seriously, lmao. I love the baby angle too though. So happy though...E! lol
Burnt Paper 2008-04-29 . chapter 1
i know you just got a rveiw from me for coffee at midnight but this ones for moonlit apples and i love the title as much as i like this story and i cant wait to read the next sequel!
XoXo
shiraz
Lucia3 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
hi again, I loved this one too. I loved how it was tony that was making reeve sick, i didn´t see that coming (wich is saying something, cause I usualy predict most of the plots). And I loved when the pixie showed up in the end.
xSilentScreamsAreLoudestx 2007-09-14 . chapter 1
ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod! i absolutely LOVE your Coffee at midnight series! i was so excited when i found out there was a sequel! yay! AND i jut started reading it tonight! i love ur writings! geez...do i sound like a fangirl or is it just me? lol
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