I like the Doomsday imagery in this poem. The fact that the speaker wants someone to 'kiss' her suggests that she's not afraid of the end of the world--she just wants to feel loved when it's all said and done with. Keep up the good work. Thanks for the review you left me. :)

Very poetic, beautiful wording.

it's very pretty and shows a lot of longing and beauty in its two lines. I like it a lot.

Two lines of beauty.

That's poetic for me. Nice work! :)

How do you do it? How can you capture such complexity in such simplicity?

Short, but absolutely beautiful. You don't need to expand on it, but I'm sure it would be even more wonderful if you did. Great job, and thanks so much for the review!

This is incredibly gorgeous. Lovely.

A shockingly original style of love poetry. Congratulations on earning a review from yours truly! ^^ I do like the idea here. It's... Well, it's just two lines. But they're gorgeous lines, and they're so simple and beautiful and breathtaking... Let's just face it. No matter how many hours I spend slaving over keyboard and thesaurus alike, I can't write a review for this poem. It's too ... -e.l.

It's beautiful in its simplicity.

Hey where's the rest of the poem? =( It's such a great beginning, I demand you to add more! =P Nah I kid. But really, this could be the start of something wonderful. Or you can consider making it into a hiku...that would be interesting.