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| lifesjustbegun 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseTomorrow's Memories, awsome poem/song, are you in a band? I really love the first line, this whole thing is kind of like how I used to feel/be. I hope you don't mind but I think I'm going to read and review all your work. ~Liz |
| becky 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethat is me exactly. i guess im not as alone as i thought i was : ) x |
| BeliefInSquirells 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis seems so heartfelt. I felt like i was watching this girl go through all that stuff. But then that might just be me... ^.^ Nice repeated chorus too |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Perfectly written and expressed. Excellent job! Keep writing! |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is quite good, I think. Nice job with the imagery. Wish I could hear it with music, or a melody. That would be fun. Falcon |