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lifesjustbegun
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseTomorrow's Memories,
awsome poem/song, are you in a band? I really love the first line, this whole thing is kind of like how I used to feel/be. I hope you don't mind but I think I'm going to read and review all your work.
~Liz
becky
2007-02-26
ch 1, anon.
abusethat is me exactly.
i guess im not as alone as i thought i was : ) x
BeliefInSquirells
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseThis seems so heartfelt. I felt like i was watching this girl go through all that stuff.
But then that might just be me... ^.^
Nice repeated chorus too
xDancingintheRainx
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Perfectly written and expressed. Excellent job! Keep writing!
Falcon0Rider
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseThis is quite good, I think. Nice job with the imagery. Wish I could hear it with music, or a melody. That would be fun.

Falcon
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