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| Racquet 2008-07-03 ch 35, | abuseAre you going to kill Eve? Because you said that two would live out of list of Alex, Chris and Eve, you proclaimed Chris would live and that the dead person was a girl (the use of her). Just wondering... And just so you know, I love your story (I was actually contemplating drawing a picture-- maybe I will, but I'm too addicted to the story to stop and draw). I read OSTSG and it's now one of my favorites and now I'm almost done with this book, thus meaning I will have to move on to the unfinished one and wait like all the others who have kept reading throughout the years... Well, amazing story! ~Racquet |
| Harmonic Discord 2008-06-15 ch 37, | abuseWow. So I've just finished reading this entire story, and I have to say, it's definitely one of the best I've read on fpress. I absolutely love your characters - they're so real! (And I have to agree - Cindy is an awesome antagonist.) The twists you give to the fairytales we know and love are amazing and incredibly inventive - everything is interconnected, and I love trying to puzzle out what's going to happen next as I read. Amazing story - I can't wait to read part II! -- Harmonic Discord, straight from the Review Marathon! (Link in Profile) |
| Red Rose Petalz 2008-06-09 ch 37, anon. | abuseABSOLUTELY AMAZING! (if you haven't noticed I've been reading ALL your stories) This is great, although all the characters sometimes made my head spin. It helped alot...you know reading OSTSG and I LOVE Vinny. Surprisingly I know a guy JUST like him...it scares me. But Helena sometimes annoys me, so vain. I love how you developed all the characters. I'll bet I'll start crying when someone dies. I did when Alex fake died, even though I knew he was still alive! Can't wait to read the 2nd half of the book. Do you realize how many hours of sleep I've lost over your incredibly awesome stories?!?! (Its a compliment) I'm very particular about what I read. I would love to see this published one day! Never stop writing! (and I actually agree on the readers/writers of romance don't have very interesting lives) Okay I'll stop typing now, dang that was long. And the cookie questions amused me! ~Rose (HAHAHAHA The Irony of that just Struck me teehee, Okay don't look at me like that its ermm 1:26 and I just had some sugar xD) |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-06-09 ch 37, | abusei luv this story too itz in my faves! |
| scowabanga-girl2763 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abusehey. I have a ten year old sister and she would say those kinds of things. I know that this story is complete, but I just like noting on the things that the author says. I find it entertaining... |
| Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn 2008-05-19 ch 37, | abuseone word: Awesomness. lol seriously. No other word can describe it.. grr, i want them to find her already!! lool and i find it really weird that u've had so many cookie qtns thrown ur way.. lool. funny though. xx lj xx |
| Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn 2008-05-18 ch 11, | abuseAaww lol he has her all figured out. Its cute. But he's mean too. lo0l and i cant help but think (or hope) that at this moment in time he is jealous of her relationship with "something". lo0l, aww i gotta love vinny |
| Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn 2008-05-18 ch 6, | abuseo0oh well there was another side to Helena's personality! Nice. |
| Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abusethe boys (eric and chris) are too cute; seriously. lool u absolutely made my day (or night, however u want to view it, it IS 1 o'clock) with these lines: “Say that again, Penelope, and I’ll eat your yellow livered heart out.” She blinked. “Do you even know what you said?” “Is it yellow-bellied? Wait, I know it…” but ... i discovered something.. not at all flattering. i tend to *cringe* cackle when im laughing at night. CACKLE. Not even laugh weirdly but CACKLE ¬_¬ Quite a depressing discovery.. i blame it on lack of functioning brain cells.. |
| Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abusethis chapter was soo sad! You actually had me crying there! but hahAa i relish the fact (okay so im feeling kinda cocky) that i KNOW the secret. But her secret makes me sadder i mean.. she already seems insecure with things as she is.. (and no im not talking about her legs) But i noticed how when she was showing Chris her necklace and she was speaking to Melissa that it was 'the first time' someone compared her to her mother. And as sensitive as she seems to be; not being compared to her from b4 must of had her wondering.. But i loved this chapter. And though im thinking im supposed to hate him at the moment; i like Vince. He sees through her unhappiness and 'fake' cheer and such soo... yh i like him. |
| Always Swimming 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI have to say I have only read that first chapter but I already love your story. I will probably have to read it all at one time. |
| Lady Knight of Sherwood Cas... 2008-05-09 ch 15, anon. | abuseHello again,I do not mean to be rude but I thought it best to inform you That in 15 when Eve say "not what but who?" it should be who not whom. |
| Lady Knight of Sherwood Cas... 2008-05-09 ch 13, anon. | abuseDear ranting Hello, I must say I am quite Impressed with your writing, it makes the story com real, I have read all of your works as have many of my friends whom I recommended to read your writing. |
| Kyazain Kuriauota 2008-04-29 ch 36, | abuseHow could you! You can't kill Eve! It will make me cry! Or, actually you could kill Eve, just after she and Robert reveal their true feelings toward each other, kiss, and blah, blah, blah... please? |
| Kyazain Kuriauota 2008-04-29 ch 35, | abuseEve should end up with Robert. I have no idea why, but I think they would make a nice couple.:) |