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Mariella 2009-10-27 . chapter 1
This is what happens when I stop reading for months. You go and start a new book. Sigh. I lost my place in the other book, so I guess I'll have to start over...hehe...

This is the second time I'm reading this story and doubtlessly it'll continue to fascinate me. Please do update more often so that I won't lose my place again. Please. :)
~Mariella
KarmaC 2009-10-24 . chapter 37
This was wonderful! I loved the way your plot twisted and turned and kept me intrigued. I'm going to definitely read the sequel and the prequel. I promise I'll leave a more detailed review at the end of one of the other stories! Wonderful job!
MellyMeliza 2009-10-05 . chapter 30
“Finish that statement and die,”
HAHA! Best line ever. :)
MellyMeliza 2009-10-04 . chapter 12
How sad!!
I just started reading this story yesterday.
I feel so bad for Helena!
And to think I was totally rooting for Robert! But that jerk!
Totally team Vinny now.
Hopelessly Undead 2009-09-26 . chapter 1
I know this story was posted awhile ago, but I'm excited to read it. I love new spins on old fairy tales. The first chapter was great and I'm excited to see where it goes. I especially love the already dynamic relationship of the family. It immediately drew me in as a family I want to be part of, already caring about the characters from the beginning.
Excellent story!
JDLarson 2009-09-26 . chapter 37
I'm beginning to think that this is my favorite book ever. I can't wait to start on the sequel! and yes i practically read this and the Cinderella story in less than three days. my boyfriend wants to inform you that because of this he now hates you. he seems to think that you're contributing too much to my nerdiness by your great writing--i just told him that he's only jealous because i love Vinny more than him ;) lol
hmm . . . maybe I'll draw a picture . . . but no promises. i'm such a procrastinator. and it takes me forever to finish things!! but its a thought! NOw on to the next story!
JDLarson 2009-09-26 . chapter 30
Aren’t Aurora’s eyes blue and green? i know where you put it. at the end of ostsg you made mentioning to Helena's sister and her deformity--just in case you wanted to fix it!
JDLarson 2009-09-26 . chapter 16
okay I have a question, just how old is eve? i can't tell if she's the same age as them or older! thx!
JDLarson 2009-09-25 . chapter 12
I know Vinny's a jerk, but i still fully support Vinny/Helena. oh, and now i absolutely despise Robert. I think I'm addicted to this fic.
(btw what stories on fanfic to you right?)
JDLarson 2009-09-25 . chapter 5
I love Robert so far . . . But (I know, there is always a but) but. . . I don't think he has replaced Alex for me yet. *sigh* You did such a great job with Alex that i think you may have ruined any guy i ever date . . . lol! and as much as i want to like Robert--he's just not up to par with Alex . . . yet!
also, i think i may be on team Vinny/Helena, since they are not really cousins and all, and i have a soft spot for characters not getting along.
but there's so much more to this story that i have yet to read so i may change my mind in the near future!lol
loveables 2009-09-20 . chapter 37
I really enjoy reading this story, i can't wait to read the next one tomorow!
loveables 2009-09-20 . chapter 20
they seem too old to be twelve/thirteen :s
Michael's Divinity 2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Very delightful. I enjoyed it very much so. I've been looking for something to read, and this caught my attention. So, I look forward to reading the rest of this one, and the next book you have posted.

I like wording, the descriptions, and the characters thus far, but it's far too early to say exactly what character I like the most.

Until my next review, I bid you adieu.
MsMellowMint 2009-07-11 . chapter 37
I am obsessed with your writing. You have an marvelous ability to catch people in your spell of words.
Thank you for the amazing read.
I was delighted to know that I am permitted to draw your characters as well. I hope to do so soon. Although sadly enough, I'm a hopeless failure at coloring in my drawings, so I will probably leave it black and white.
Hannah 2009-06-28 . chapter 37
OMG! I've has a wonderful time reading this story! I find it exciting and I cant wait to read the next part! As for Eve, for some reason I knew that she would be the on to die... (Partly because you said it would be either Chris, Alex, or Eve, then later you said *she* had to die...) Anyways, you are a brilliant writer and I am looking forward to reading more of your thrilling stories!

~Hannah :D
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