Reviews for They're allways there

sin olvido
2007-02-25
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abuseSpellcheck probably won't pick up on this, but you're using the wrong forms of there, their, and they're in various places.

THERE: referring to a location; "Yes, honey, I left the plates over there."
THEIR: a possessive; "As for Pierre and Sophie, their hearts were broken."
THEY'RE: they are; "No, I already told you that they're not coming to the party."

"Their soul is like the wind drifting over the sea."
'Their souls are,' you mean? Unless you imply that many people share one solitary soul, which is... a bit impossible, but hey, it's your artistic interpretation.

"We often wonder why did they have to go at what cost."
If it's wonderment and using the verb 'to wonder,' you don't need 'did.' Simply saying 'we wonder why they had...' would suffice without sounding choppy.

"Their allways there" = they're always there. Having this grammatically incorrect title is an extreme putoff. You sound uneducated.

Use spellcheck. Have someone look over your work.

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