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| Moni Jane 2007-03-12 ch 1,  | abusewell that was interesting. ^_- hehehe I liked it. You could probably even write more to this if you wanted. May good writings continue to you. ~Moni Jane |
| alice 2007-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abusehahaha that's hilarious... nd it's so ALIVE too... just one thing... in the second paragraph or so u kept repeating "policeman"... try using a pronoun or something otherwise great work :] |