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Twilight Starr 2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Great piece. I like your pen name. Nice work.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day and a brilliant summer.

~Twilight Starr~
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle 2007-02-26 . chapter 1
I don't see a problem in this poem.

My guess is that each pair (or line) are like little "pieces"; complete puzzle pieces, that then fit into "one" with the frame that the ending makes.

I like the 'fitting' old-fashioned reference to "gloves", the double meaning sparks pure images in my mind. ;)

As Always, Melinda
Complications 2007-02-25 . chapter 1
That's pretty cool. I really liked the ending. It's a pitty the formating didn't work, it was a little bit distracting with \par at the end of each line.
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